Thursday, March 8, 2012

WEET-BIX TRY

1,2,3,4,5, oh no they are starting to count out the heats 6,7,8,9, please 10,11,12,13, please let me and Olivia in the same heat 14,15 yes we are in the same heat. You’re on girlie. I need to go to the toilet I thought to myself jeepers creepers that waters cold I said as I hopped into the pool. I don’t think I will be able to swim in that whee go’s the whistle oops to to late to go back now I was swimming my heart out. On my second length I heard my Mum screamed at me GO CASEY. Yes I was first out of the pool.

7 comments:

  1. Awesome description of how you felt - I did yell loudly - I was so proud of you.

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  2. Wow Lizard this is so cool, It really shows what it was like at the start. Was there lots of Parkvale people?

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  3. well done Casey. you must like the weet-bix triathlon

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  4. Great Lizard! I like your describing words for the cold water and for "your'e on girlie." Your Mum must of been proud!

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  5. Wow Lizard
    I like this piece of writing it shows a lot how you are feeling.I also like the word jeepers creepers.What stroke were you doing?

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  6. Hi Casey great piece of writing Is that my sister Olivia?Did you have looks of fun? What did you like the most?

    Katrina

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  7. Awesome, Lizard it really shows how you were feeling at the time. Your Mum must have been really proud of you.

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